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Have you ever had to make a decision?-they aren't so easy to make, right? Here are some of the influences on our choices; friends, family, role models, and the law.
My friends influence my choices because they are people that you don't want to fall out with and you care about them and what they think. They might influence your choice by saying what they think then persuading you to think the same. You just have to remember that you can always say NO.
Friends aren't the only strong influence. Families are another strong influence as well. Families might influence your decisions because if you don't listen to them they might not let you have ice-cream after dinner. They should be people you trust because they're your family. If your family started to believe that smoking was bad, will you EVER smoke?
You would probably have an admired role model as well. If THEY started smoking, would you? If they got a weirdo haircut would you do the same? Role models are a very strong influence you just have to remember that they are not always right. They can do bad things too.
The law prevents you to do bad from doing bad things. It's best to listen to the law when you are in a bad situation with other people. If you don't listen to it, then, you'll be in big trouble and the police might come. The police are scary if you break the law. TRY not to break the law!
There are lots of influences for our choices and these are some of the biggest. Some influences are good, some are bad. If you come up with the right choice, you should be glad.
